Meera's tongue claimed his fingers, her hand cleaned his nectar. slipping a visiting card under the waistband of his underwear, her promise lingered.'I want every inch of you,' Meera whispered
It may be difficult to match or surpass the raw emotions, the lure of forbidden, secretive, rendezvous in an interlude occurring in a public setting? Maybe next the couple could meet up in a theater, restaurant, even in a church? My thoughts of fantasy occur in a public setting. Most any locale that could dangerously cause them to be seen or discovered? A park bench? Sports stadium underneath a blanket. In the sand under a towel. In the ocean or lake hidden partially covered by water?
Anything’s possible nothing’s decided yet. You’ve painted such vivid, tempting scenarios… the tension of almost getting caught does add a certain thrill, doesn’t it?
Let’s see where their desires take them next. Thank you for joining this journey from start to end. More to come. Your support needed.
I’m actually been fortunate enough to experience a couple of those fantasies I described. I’d love to do the rest someday, but I don’t know. I live long enough.
Since the story was meant to be more realistic, in the sense that Meera and Aarav would not act out of character to their surroundings, the way you needed the scene worked perfectly. They experienced a public sexual encounter without being noticed. She left the window open for future contact, while still giving him and herself a memento should that be their first and last time together. On a personal note, I would have enjoyed a more varied nomenclature for their body parts, simply because seeing love mountain, bear, and cave so often and within short amounts of writing started becoming tedious for me. Again, that’s just my personal issue and felt your choice of terms fit the mood you crafted.
Apologies for the late reply, and thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts. I genuinely appreciate your feedback and will definitely keep it in mind as I continue to grow and improve as a writer.
Interestingly, I have received a few comments and direct messages from readers who mentioned that my stories aroused them deeply so much so that they could not stop themselves from touching themselves while reading. I take it as a sign that the sensual tone I aimed for did reach its audience.
Regarding the repeated use of terms like “love mountain,” “cave,” and “bear,” you are absolutely right. That was actually a little creative experiment on my part. I wanted to test how those metaphors would land with readers, and I even made a separate post to gauge reactions. In this case, it seems the repetition became more distracting than effective, and I truly value you pointing that out.
I also want to say how much it means to me that you and a few others consistently read my stories. Your presence and engagement keep me motivated to keep writing and exploring new layers in my storytelling. Thank you for being part of this journey.
It may be difficult to match or surpass the raw emotions, the lure of forbidden, secretive, rendezvous in an interlude occurring in a public setting? Maybe next the couple could meet up in a theater, restaurant, even in a church? My thoughts of fantasy occur in a public setting. Most any locale that could dangerously cause them to be seen or discovered? A park bench? Sports stadium underneath a blanket. In the sand under a towel. In the ocean or lake hidden partially covered by water?
Anything’s possible nothing’s decided yet. You’ve painted such vivid, tempting scenarios… the tension of almost getting caught does add a certain thrill, doesn’t it?
Let’s see where their desires take them next. Thank you for joining this journey from start to end. More to come. Your support needed.
I’m actually been fortunate enough to experience a couple of those fantasies I described. I’d love to do the rest someday, but I don’t know. I live long enough.
An ending to match their journey. Simple, touching, yet room for more.
Thank you for your feedback. Could you please share more details? It would greatly help me improve my next story.
Since the story was meant to be more realistic, in the sense that Meera and Aarav would not act out of character to their surroundings, the way you needed the scene worked perfectly. They experienced a public sexual encounter without being noticed. She left the window open for future contact, while still giving him and herself a memento should that be their first and last time together. On a personal note, I would have enjoyed a more varied nomenclature for their body parts, simply because seeing love mountain, bear, and cave so often and within short amounts of writing started becoming tedious for me. Again, that’s just my personal issue and felt your choice of terms fit the mood you crafted.
Apologies for the late reply, and thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts. I genuinely appreciate your feedback and will definitely keep it in mind as I continue to grow and improve as a writer.
Interestingly, I have received a few comments and direct messages from readers who mentioned that my stories aroused them deeply so much so that they could not stop themselves from touching themselves while reading. I take it as a sign that the sensual tone I aimed for did reach its audience.
Regarding the repeated use of terms like “love mountain,” “cave,” and “bear,” you are absolutely right. That was actually a little creative experiment on my part. I wanted to test how those metaphors would land with readers, and I even made a separate post to gauge reactions. In this case, it seems the repetition became more distracting than effective, and I truly value you pointing that out.
I also want to say how much it means to me that you and a few others consistently read my stories. Your presence and engagement keep me motivated to keep writing and exploring new layers in my storytelling. Thank you for being part of this journey.