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Serena Vice's avatar

I've just started reading you.

Les jeux des mots - mesmerising...

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Thank you.. 🖤

You’ve just stepped into my little world of word games. Careful, it gets addictive

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Serena Vice's avatar

Too late to withdraw 😉

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Enjoy.. 🖤

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Laura Knapke's avatar

Wonderful first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Thanks you! —I hope all three series take you on a joyful rollercoaster.

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Laura Knapke's avatar

I'm sure it will.

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Brianna Endrina's avatar

“But for now, the shawl concealed their world, and the night stretched ahead, full of possibilities neither could fully predict.” — fking loooove this line 💚🌹

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Ahh I just saw this now I missed your comment, so sorry for the late reply!

That line is one of my personal favorites too, so your love for it means a lot 💚🌹

Thank you for feeling it so deeply.

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Brianna Endrina's avatar

It’s so so good! 🥰🥰

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Velvet Lure's avatar

🖤🙂 They are returning… Hope you have followed the full bus journey.

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The Poetry Witch 🥀's avatar

Throughly enjoying this delicious slow burn ♥️

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Glad it is a slow fire some flames are meant to linger, not rush. ♥️

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YourSecretNeeds's avatar

Ohhhhh yes that lovely build up. I love giving handjobs on buses. Any transport bus buses are my favourite! More!! xxx

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Velvet Lure's avatar

How about a motorcycle ride driver in full control of the speed, and the pillion holding the driver’s shaft… you know, just for safety.

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YourSecretNeeds's avatar

Oh yes! I have been pillion and thought about how that would work... I’ll have to find out now!!

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Now that thought out in the wild, there is no going back only one way to find out just how wild that ride can get.

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Ella Light's avatar

I’m enjoying Aarav’s tension. Lucky boy.

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Indeed, Just close your eyes. You will be in bus. Watching Aarav and Meera in last raw seat

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chris j's avatar

Beautiful pacing and very sexy. Erotica on the buses, yum.

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Thank you. Stay tuned for more yum.

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sub's avatar

Lovely introduction to these characters and hopefully a sensual experience!!

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Thank you. Read all parts one by one. More to come daily a part

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